Creating the Module
Empathy and Elaboration: Using 21st Century Tools to Enhance Creative Writing has been through several implementations and revisions – each time, we look at what works, what does not, and how we can better enhance active engagement and learning with the tools available. This is a collaborative process, heavily involving teacher input and feedback.
Key to this and every module we create are the opening and closing activity reflections. These reflections help the teacher gauge where the students are, as well as help the students clarify and demonstrate their understanding of abstract and difficult concepts. The opening reflections are to be informal and non-threatening, and the closing reflections only slightly more formal – their answers can be written down here for documentation of improvement. However, even the closing reflections should be approachable. These are not exams in the formal sense, but they do allow the teacher to grade a student’s performance. If the student can articulate the answers to these questions such as why x was a good context for learning y, they have a deep understanding of the concept.
Activity 1: Microblogging (Tweeting) in character:
Students use Twitter to post real-time updates as characters in a source text
Activity 2: Drafting a Collaborative Poem Using the Class Twitter Feed: Students appropriate content from the class Twitter feed produced in the previous activity and from the primary text (Tim O’Brien’s The Things They Carried) to build a collaborative poem on the theme of war
Activity 3: Drafting Fan Fiction: Students develop speculative fiction that draws on and transforms elements of a primary text
Activity 4: Networked Peer Review: Students collaborate on reviewing and providing feedback to each other on their fan fiction artifacts
Activity 5: Formal essay: Students submit a formal essay that offers an analysis of how their own or a classmate’s fan fiction work interacts with the source text
End-of-Activity tasks:Students will reflect on their learning by considering how they understand and practiced Common Core Standards
In studying achievement, it became clear quickly that in order to tackle something as abstract as character empathy, the students would need to have some way to practice empathizing with a character in an engaging way, preferably using some medium that intrigued and sparked interest. Twitter has become wildly popular, and we found it particularly interesting because in order to tweet effectively, a person must clearly and concisely convey meaning in a small number of characters.
The implications for education became clear, and Twitter took its place in the module. Students take on the personality of a character in a novel – in the early implementations, teachers used The Things They Carried– and begin to converse in short tweets with other characters in the story. This encourages students to dig into their character and speak for them, thereby allowing the students to gain a better understanding of and to empathize with that character. As Atticus states, “you never really know a man until you stand in his shoes and walk around in them” (Lee, chapter 31). This activity allows students to walk in the character’s shoes, and speak from the character’s perspective. Additionally, students are encouraged to discuss the tweets themselves, and the representations of each character. They are asked to reflect upon their own work and the activity itself.
When the students embark on the activity of extending a character or storyline, they must first understand the characters and storylines intimately to write effectively. Tweeting has helped the students empathize with the characters, and therefore has assisted in preparing them to write an extension of the story.
In this activity, students now elaborate on the types of messages they were sending in tweets, but now they must articulate in fluid sentences the full meaning of their character’s feelings or the emotion of the story. By extending the story rather than analyzing the characters, students are encouraged to continue exploring empathy, and the role the reader plays in interpreting a text. As the Fan Fiction is written, students demonstrate their ability to empathize with a character and understand their point of view, which in turn helps them learn to analyze a character deeply.
Students are asked throughout the module to reflect on the contexts, the concepts, and the practices. The reflections begin at the surface and gradually ask students to think deeper not only about the context in which they are studying the concepts, but about the concepts themselves, and how they might use these concepts in other aspects of their lives.